This bit needs more work.
Is 'airy' something you want to be advertising in the middle of winter?
What does 'lovely' actually mean?...consider revising.
"couple starting out" sounds like it would suit a FHB but then you go on to say that it is a "prestigious" suburb.....does a normal FHB...
A second vote for "get rid of the green".
House looks good on the outside. Gardens are good. Views are good. Internally:
1. Get rid of the green
2. Get rid of those dark feature walls in the bredroom
Write some decent advertising copy (if the agent can't). It is all features & no...
It does not work. An agent cannot afford to advertise a property (or put much effort in) if they cannot be guaranteed to be the seller of.
Please post a link to your advert on re.com and we will critique the advertising copy and the photos and make comments on how to improve.
