great advertising example

[russellpeter]

pick whats wrong with this ad?

http://www.realestate.com.au/property-unit-qld-brisbane+city-4573321

 

[Jacque]

Poorly shot (PM or agent clearly in bathroom pic)
No attention to detail (messy, out of focus, no view pics)
Incorrect information in ad (inspection by appt only but also OFI )
Misleading foyer pic as leading photo

Have I missed anything else?!

 

[fokas]

This thread will be useless as soon as that ad is no longer active. (Why do people still not bother screencapping or saving and uploading pics?!)

 

[wylie]

Everything Jacque said, plus every word is capitalised... annoying.

 

[Spades]

Hi russelpeter,

PM wanted a selfie?

Cheers Spades.

 

[PrimeCommercial]

Got that too Wylie...What's Going On With All The Capitals, It's Freaking Annoying!

 

[vaughan]

pick whats wrong with this ad?

http://www.realestate.com.au/property-unit-qld-brisbane+city-4573321

There is no toilet in the kitchen?

 

[Propertunity]

There is no toilet in the kitchen?

Well spotted!!

 

[INVSTOR]

There is no toilet in the kitchen?

My hubby did some of the plumbing there, probably explains why we have a toilet in our kitchen.

 

[INVSTOR]

- slight exaggeration. The toilet has been in the hallway, formal dining, storeroom and is now in the spare room.....I'm sure he'll finish installing it one day.

 

[DaveM]

The photos are deceptive, it has quite a spacious grand lounge room with so many sofas and a tiled walkway, where the other photos suggest it is an enclosed and messy apartment. They must do most of their entertaining in the lounge.