The copy (write up) is good. I think x weeks free rent sounds better than reduced rent for x weeks however.Hi Ed
Great suggestion, thanks. Here is the link to the ad - more than welcome any comments. I think the photos and write up is ok. The property doesn't have any furniture at the moment so I would need to hire a staging company to fill it with furniture for the photos if we felt it needed better photos.
There is an OFI advertised for tomorrow in the middle of the day. IMO if you're doing OFIs during the week an evening is far more desirable to tenants. Have you been doing Saturday opens? If not, why not?
While the pictures could be improved they show what the unit is. I wouldn't change them - rental pictures just need to entice someone to view. I would never stage a rental.
It looks like the kitchen has a half sized dishwasher, there's no mention of that in the copy.