9. Really, call me a retard but I can't pick any grammar errors from the last sentence
The last sentence is just poor style, that's all.
"Investors, downsizers or first home owners will certainly appreciate this hot offer proposing an affordable opportunity to satisfy all requirements"
It has a jarring mix of colloquialism ('hot offer') and pomposity ('proposing an affordable opportunity to satisfy all requirements'). The latter is too formal to include in an Australian advertisement and the awkward use of 'proposing' makes it read like an email scam.
The opening sentence (as well as containing two errors) is similarly awkward ('join Frankstons (sic) popular property market buy (sic) .....).
The next sentence doesn't raise too many hackles, but the bit about 'adding a paved courtyard' isn't clear writing. 'Affirms total convenience' is not incorrect but neither does anyone speak like that (especially in Franga!).
In contrast, something like below would be passable:
Join Frankston's proud property owners by purchasing this original two bedroom unit at the rear of a quiet block. This low-maintenance home features a bright kitchen with free-standing oven, large lounge with wall heater, two generous bedrooms with built-in robes and a combined bathroom/laundry. Outside is a securely-fenced paved courtyard and undercover parking for one car. Add your own touches or comfortable as is, investors, downsizers or first home buyers will all love the convenience this handy property provides.
Vendors pay agents because agents can market the property better than the vendor could. It is not too much to expect that ads are scanned by at least one person who passed Year 12 English before publication!
anyway, I know exactly the street and shops you are talking about, I didn't think fairway was the worst in frankston
It doesn't look too bad near the shops (that's going on looks - the shopkeeper who erected the security screen may differ) and the Neighbourhood House seems to have a lot going on. But I'm wary of big unit blocks in poor areas such as you get at the freeway end of Fairway (though double glazing helps with the noise - good thing those flats don't have balconies).
The southern area near Beach Rd has got rough elements (the sign saying trespassers will be shot was there), but it's much handier than Fairway. The Beach Rd shopping area is getting a makeover (plans on shop windows), the bakery isn't bad and the laundrette (with honour system book exchange) is the best kept you'll see anywhere.
Number 5, is that on fairway as well??
Yes. A few more like that should change the area, though I don't think anything will help the noise from the freeway and it being less well located than other areas of Franga.