I only see a 1 pic a courtyard with a dirty window on the acton site, but that's likely my browser. If its the main photo I would be changing it to another more interesting one such as the outdoor area looking into the kitchen.
That range hood duct cover does stand out with the marks. Did you install it yourself? Normally the cornice is cut so the cover goes right to the ceiling.
Beyond that I don't see too much wrong with the text. Depends what you consider to be features not mentioned.
At least the photos are better than some I have seen. Have to wonder if your buying the furniture or a house sometimes with the closeups.
Being picky, but I noted that also as well as the self-promotion "For Deb Brady's Insight on Real Estate make sure you check out her blog", but hey, thats agents and why they have a bigger picture of themselves on signboards than the property
I like this style as an investor
Property Description
Perfect Investment Long Term Tenants
This immaculately presented 2 bedroom recently renovated town house would return $525 -550 p/w income. Not a cent needs to be spent on this stunning transformation. Perfect for the first home buyer, investor or FIFO worker needing a lock up and leave base within the Western Suburbs. Can be purchased furnished or un-furnished.
Perfect location with nearby Federation natural park land and easy access to Stirling Hwy.Walking distance to both the beach and the river and to public transport.
Poetic licence taken
* Body corp fees approx $.... p/w
* Rates council and water approx $... p/w
* Rent $525 to 550 p/w
* Purchase price $485,000 to $500,000
* Gross Yield 5.6 to 5.9 % *
Property description:
* 2 bedrooms all with built In wardrobes, master with semi-ensuite and air con
* 1 Bathroom and toilet
* Secure garage
* Remote lock up garage
* Spilt system air conditioner to lounge/dining and master bedroom
* Fans to all other bedrooms
* Dishwasher and modern Kitchen
* Private landscaped rear garden
* Roof insulation
* Pool in complex with covered entertainment area
* Quality fittings, floor coverings throughout and down lights
* Security screened doors and windows down ,fly screen's to windows up stairs
* Built approx Aug 2000.
* 12 town houses in a secure complex
This is a must for your investment portfolio with excellent presentation to , close to all amenities for tenant's convenience makes this property a must-buy for the discerning FHB or sophisticated investor .
* Please note all gross yields and return details are approximate and are based on the asking price only (not the sale price), the gross return also does not include any tax credits or deductions the purchaser may be entitled to, and is based on information provided by a number of sources. 
